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Tuesday, 1 November 2016

Camp Raglan Mystery

The crew just pulled up onto the side of the road to realise “this is not what I expected” said james “it's so ugly” said kal “I Think it's cool, there are heaps of bushes” said james. “ I can send you back home you know” said the teacher annoyed. “ok go to your cabin I hope you had lunch cause you're going straight to a game” he continued when they we're walking they saw the maintenance guy he was really ugly they thought he was up to no good “ok, you need to get to one side to the other without falling of” said the instructor. Once they finished that they headed to there cabin “what do you think he was doing” said chase “cleaning like he's meant to” said james sounding sarcastic “in the night let's follow him” said kal “yea not creepy at all” said james “but let's go it anyway” he continued . It was the darkest hour of the night (PITCH BLACK) and they saw the maintenance guy holding a lantern “let's follow him” said james “yep” said kal the teacher saw them and told them to go to there cabin but they didn't listen and ran following the maintenance guy he looked behind him and didn't see anything. He entered a secret pathway and the crew followed him “chase give me a torch” said kal “ok” said chase “it's not here” he said “where is it” said kal someone don't want use to be here” said james “let's go” said kal they kept on walking and got to a door and they opened the door inside there was a treasure box with stuff inside and the maintenance guy was cleaning it he said “I have to do it, or i will die”. So then they took the treasure later to find out it was DIRT. then the maintenance guy because he wasn't doing his job got incinerated. “WOW” said kal




We are going to camp for the next three days. we wrote some narrative writing about camp.

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